LEC052003 Afsana Begum Chowdhury

Thesis statements 

1/The internet has been useful for the improvement of the US economy because of its ability to expand the commerce and spur entrepreneurship.

2/Even though social media has revolutionized how people socialize and communicate with each other online, it has both positive and negative impacts on society.

3/Stress in the fast-food workplace has led to serious physical, psychological, and emotional problems for employees.

4/
Advertisers target young people when marketing cigarettes, alcohol, and adult movies.

5/Air pollution is the contamination of the air by noxious gases and small particles of solid and liquid matter in amounts that can cause harm to living organisms.

6/The Internet can be extremely valuable for education, but online instruction is not appropriate for all classes in all situations; its implementation needs to be based on the instructor's learning objective, the need for technology, and the availability of resources.

Comments

  1. Annette Sebastian3 March 2021 at 08:08

    The fifth statement is a fact rather than a thesis statement.

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  2. Hanna P A3 March 2021 at 08:47

    The fifth one seems to be a fact than a statement. The sixth one is too lengthy; it is better to compress it.

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  3. Annie V.Verghese3 March 2021 at 10:22

    The stand taken in the 2nd statement is ambiguous, 3rd one has a clarity issue, 5th one is a fact and 6th one could have been succinct.

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